Evolution of the Nuclear Health Care Organization
HCS 514 - Managing In Today's Health Care Organizations
November 11, 2013
Evolution of the Nuclear Health Care Organization

The nuclear health care organization, within the hospital setting, will [Remove comma] continue to advance indefinitely, over the next ten [Express numbers higher than nine in digits (when not the first word in the sentence)] years. The key focus of nuclear medicine involves medical equipment such as total-body scanners and radioactive material. This advanced technology plays a key role in the treatment and diagnosis of diseases, with [Remove comma before "with" (unless beginning or ending a parenthetical phrase)] a specific focus on organs, tissue, tumors, and bone. Hospitals will continue to organize diagnostic and treatment regimens, according to advances in technology. The nuclear health care organization can look forward to major changes in the role of healthcare [The preferred spelling is two words: health care] workers, the culture of the consumer, and the methods of communication between stakeholders. Health politics and Medicare budget cuts will lead the nuclear health organization to combine a nonprofit insurance plan or fee for service with its own hospitals and clinics, with a holistic approach (Abelson, 2013). The healthcare professional will work in a culture of safety and governing bodies, enforcing safety policies (Rodak, 2013). The culture of the consumer will include, [Remove comma (unless it introduces a nonrestrictive phrase)] staying healthy with holistic approaches, viewed as mainstream preventive medicine. Methods of communication between stakeholders will be affected by Medicare’s unlikely reverse to its dramatic cuts in reimbursement. The stakeholder will survive as care is moved [The passive voice is a form of "be" (is) and a participle (moved). Over-use of the passive voice can make paragraphs officious and tedious to read. Prefer the active voice. For example, passive voice = The paper was completed on time. Active voice = the student completed the paper on time. See Center for Writing Excellence > Tutorials & Guides > Grammar & Writing Guides > Active & passive voice] out of the hospital, out of the physician’s office, the internet [Capitalize "Internet" as the worldwide communication network] continues to be widely utilized [Review word choice: "Utilize" can be used to mean "make good use of." For other meanings, such as "place in service" or "employ," the preferred word is "used" ] [Passive voice ] , and the consumer is encouraged [Passive voice ] to take responsibility for their [Check pronoun agreement--if "their" refers to "consumer" (or a singular subject), it should be singular, too (his or her)] own health. The main change bearing the greatest influence involves the role of