a formal outline. In writing your first list, don’t bother to set items down in the order of importance. List your main points and trust your mind to organize them. You will probably make one list, study it, make another, study it, and perhaps make another. You can orga- nize each list more completely than the last. This preliminary process may save you hours of starting and stopping.
Write with your list outline in front of you. Once you begin to write, commit yourself to the task at hand. Do not get up until you have writ- ten for an hour. Write your thoughts quickly. Let one sentence give you an idea to develop in the next. Organization, grammar, spelling, and even clarity of sentences are not nearly as important as getting the first draft together. No matter how desperate you feel, keep going.
Always keep your mind open to new ideas that pop into your head as you write. Let your list outline help you, but don’t become a slave to it. Writers often start an essay with one topic in mind only to discover that another pushes the first one aside as they work. Ideas you had not even thought of before you began to write may pile onto your paper, and five or six pages into your first draft you may realize that you are going to write about something you did not imagine when you started.
If such a revelation comes, be grateful and accept it. But don’t imme- diately tear up or erase your draft and start all over again. Make yourself keep on writing, developing these new ideas as they come. If you sud- denly start all over again, you may break the train of thought that has given you the new topic. Let your thoughts follow your new thesis, sail- ing on that tack until the wind changes.
When you have said everything you can say in this draft, print it out if you are working on a computer. Get up from your desk and go sit in a chair somewhere else to read it
the basic idea of comparing and contrasting. I appreciate what we did before we started the draft, because it gave me the fundamental knowledge to start the draft. The first draft is really a rough draft, because I don't have enough time to figure out the outline and resources. Two days before the due date of outline, I have two Mid-term exam to review, so I just wrote what came up first in my mind and sent the outline to professor. The result is obviously not very good. Professor told me…
first draft by converting your outline into a paragraph form. It is important to keep in mind your audience when writing, and stay on topic. Once you complete the first draft, then it is time to Revise and Edit the document. When revising, pay close attention to words and thoughts. You may need to add, remove, and relocate entire sentences to communicate more smoothly. Finally, you will need to edit the document for grammar, punctuation, and sentence structure to produce a polished final draft. The…
Reinstating the Military Draft The military draft has been used several times throughout the United States history. It has been used for different conflicts such as the World Wars, the Korean War, and the Vietnam War. By 1973, the country switched to an all-volunteer military service, abandoning the concept of the military draft (Brisbane, par. 1). Congressman Charles Rangel planned to introduce a legislation calling for the draft reinstatement. If a military draft is reinstated, everyone, no matter…
ruled the case and Schenck should not have been put in jail for trying to get people to oppose the draft. The draft was already was not in the people’s best interest and Schenck was only speaking on behalf of most of the population that too thought that the draft was not the correct thing to do and that America should not be involved in the war effort at all. When the debate started I did not have my mind made up. From the debate I gathered the arguments from both sides and then I generated what I thought…
NBA Rookies I am here at the next level; however am I ready for the lifestyle? This is the question that goes through the mind of every rookie in the NBA (National Basketball Association). NBA rookies have problems such as maturity, finances, drafts and relocations. NBA rookies have problems such as maturity issues. Whether related to skill, leadership or maturity, these rookies ditched college far too soon. I am going to have to group Anthony Davis and Austin Rivers together. Even though Davis…
re-read and pick out a minimum of six quotes/excerpts that stood out to me. Many of Anne Lamotts writing really pulls out the aspects of writing that concerns and motivates many writers. All the students had to read the Introduction, Crappy First Drafts, and Broccoli. I will divide the six main quotes throughout this essay along with the tips I received from them. First I will start with the two excerpts that first really pulled me into Lamotts writing. It started like this, “Later that summer I…
INSTAGRAM (draft) Briefly describe its general purpose capture photos and share them on their profile. 2. Describe how you interact with it (what you do with it. Do you like using it? What kind of content do you post or share? How do you interact with others who also use the site?) follow friends follow celebrities - to see what they're doing, keep updated post day to day photos - e.g. food, when you're out and about, selfies hashtags comments 'tagging' system filters 'liking' 3.…
Essay #1: Synthesis Important due dates and deadlines: SYNTHESIS DUE: Tuesday, March 3rd at the start of class FIRST DRAFT DUE: Thursday, March 5th at the start of class. Bring three completed, printed drafts for Peer Review Workshop FINAL DRAFT DUE: Thursday, March 19th at the start of class. You must also turn in your process work in a pocket folder (see list below) Synthesis: A synthesis is the act of blending information from multiple sources and melding it with the…
Description: 4-5 pages (double-spaced, Times New Roman 12pts font, 1”marings) Due: Complete Rough Draft Due Wednesday 10/1 –one hard copy brought to class for peer review Revised Draft Due Monday 10/8 one .doc or .docx copy submitted via Bb journals by 12:30pm; complete project packet due at beginning of class Rewrite Due Monday 10/22 upload .doc or .docx via Bb journals by 12:30pm Source: Carter’s “Barbarian’s Running Late,” personal experience/observation, and any pre-writing work…
“education” or “problems in education. ” As you consider this theme, focus specifically on the motivating question that the authors are responding to. What is the issue at stake? How do they each respond? II. THEY SAY: Keeping this theme/question in mind, write a few paragraphs introducing each author’s argument by summarizing, paraphrasing, and quoting the original text. Mention the essay’s main idea and supporting points, but focus on the sections of the essay that concern your specific theme/question…