Hayden Seifert P.5

Introduction: -say that I disagree with what the school is doing regarding the uniform rule
Thesis: One may disagree with the school board’s decision to enforce a uniform policy because they are being very selfish in wanting to try and gain happiness for themselves by lessening the work for them while not caring about the unhappiness of the students.
Restate what the overall situation is
First Body: - explain how the dress code will lessen the variety of the environment
Students will not be able to show off their personality to people, and may feel like they don’t fit in without showing off who they are in how they dress.
Students receive cloths as gifts all the time and now they won’t be able to show off the cool stuff they got in school anymore.
Second Body: - This will cause revolts from the students
Students may try and create a bigger problem so they can get back to wearing whatever it is that they want to wear.
Over half the school is getting punished for something they never did
Third Body: - Economical problems
The cloths are going to cost some money to purchase, and some families can’t afford to go out and by a new set of cloths
Hatred will be received from the parents
Conclusion: - Restate the thesis
Thesis: One may disagree with the school board’s decision to enforce a uniform policy because they are being very selfish in wanting to try and gain happiness for themselves by lessening the work for them while not caring about the unhappiness of the students.
Add another sentence or 2 to wrap things up
Use a different transition into start of paragraph. The school board administration is making every student where a mandatory uniform because of too many dress code violations, however the faculty is not subjected to have to wear the uniform. The administration is forcing the entire school to an unfair dress uniform because it does not want to deal with dress code violations from a small percentage of the school. One may disagree with the school board’s decision to enforce a uniform policy because they are being very selfish in wanting to try and gain happiness for themselves by lessening the work for them while not caring about the unhappiness of the students. With the loss of not being able to choose what to wear comes with a consequence to the school. Lots and lots of students look forward to being able to show off their personalities through clothing, and sometimes friends are made this way. With students being able to where what they want it enhances the schools environment by having a more variety of personalities. With everyone wearing the same type of boring clothing there would be no variety and it would seem sere. Many students receive clothing as a gift and they want to show off what they got but now they will never be able to do that, they will just have to look like everybody else, and not be able to add flavor to the schools environment. The school board is only caring about the students who have received dress code violations, and they are willing