Critique: This is a really good paper, so now lets trash it. Seriously, I though it would be helpful for you if you could see a critique of this paper so that you could more easily see some of the things that were done right and that were done wrong. Overall this is a very good paper. It is well organized, focused, and well polished (i.e., good grammar, good spelling, transitions between different discussions, etc.). As a result, it flows well --- it is easy and enjoyable to read. The…
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