me: “This paper has a good visual presentation. The content could be strengthened with a clear thesis and strong support throughout the body.” I feel like I posted a lot of problems in my intro, I don’t think is due my inability to write an essay, but rather I was confused by the instruction that was given. When I first read over the assignment, I thought to write in a letter format I can neglect a normal essay structure, I was under the impression that intro is not relevant, and we were given…
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