Fantastic. Well put together paper, great questions and insights. just watch the source. a straight up book can be an iffy source..even if a phd writes it. best if the source is highly cited (can find out through google scholar)... so if you use a book in future papers..make sure to check that .. number of citations. it should be in the hundreds (meaning hundreds of scholars have cited him) otherwise, some person wrote a book and it doesn't make it necessarily scholarly. so just watch that. otherwise great insights, good use of concepts like social class. fantastic!

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35Fantastic. Well put together paper, great questions and insights. just watch the source. a straight up book can be an iffy source..even if a phd writes it. best if the source is highly cited (can find out through google scholar)... so if you use a book in future papers..make sure to check that .. number of citations. it should be in the hundreds (meaning hundreds of scholars have cited him) otherwise, some person wrote a book and it doesn't make it necessarily scholarly. so just watch that. otherwise great insights, good use of concepts like social class. fantastic!

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liked/ disliked vague?specific / soc imagination / where get ideas 20

scholarly thorough/clear/ link lit to argument /compelling/soc imagination

35Fantastic. Well put together paper, great questions and insights. just watch the source. a straight up book can be an iffy source..even if a phd writes it. best if the source is highly cited (can find out through google scholar)... so if you use a book in future papers..make sure to check that .. number of citations. it should be in the hundreds (meaning hundreds of scholars have cited him) otherwise, some person wrote a book and it doesn't make it necessarily scholarly. so just watch that. otherwise great insights, good use of concepts like social class. fantastic!

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liked/ disliked vague?specific / soc imagination / where get ideas 20

scholarly thorough/clear/ link lit to argument /compelling/soc imagination

35Fantastic. Well put together paper, great questions and insights. just watch the source. a straight up book can be an iffy source..even if a phd writes it. best if the source is highly cited (can find out through google scholar)... so if you use a book in future papers..make sure to check that .. number of citations. it should be in the hundreds (meaning hundreds of scholars have cited him) otherwise, some person wrote a book and it doesn't make it necessarily scholarly. so just watch that. otherwise great insights, good use of concepts like social class. fantastic!

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liked/ disliked vague?specific / soc imagination / where get ideas 20