Can you proofread my sentence please, any comments or ideas for my essay about cookies. Can you also help fix my thesis sentence please, it's suppose to be about making cookies, but idk how to fix it. My thesis is the second sentence of the first paragraph. Rough Draft: How to make cookies What would be a great dessert to bake for any occasions, anybody, and anytime? Cookies are great for any occasions and the best way to express love for someone. Cookies are delicious, sweet, gooey, chewy…
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