Wesley Mah
Professor Dow
Eng-100
3 November, 2014 Visiting the Ocean
Thesis: Visiting the ocean often can be satisfying and rewarding at the same time.
I. Visiting the beach can be soothing and rewarding, from the shivering cold waves to the goose bumps from getting out of the water.
II. As time flies by, the vibrant rays of the sun warms the sand on the beach, distributing its light over the glazed ocean.
III. The piercing sound of the eagles annoyed the beach community.

Wesley Mah
Professor Dow
Eng-100
3 November, 2014
Visiting the Ocean
Visiting the ocean often can be satisfying and rewarding at the same time. Not only is the smell of the crisp salty air refreshing, but there are also a great deal of activities to do on the beach. From swimming in the energizing cold waves it was fun. The defined goose bumps spent from hours in the ocean looked unreal. Children scream and laugh on the beach as adults enjoy themselves in the cool water. The white clouds look as if they are pillows. The baby blue sky looks flawless. It is as if everything is possible to do right now on the beach. To capture these unrealistic moments were comparable to paradise. The piercing sound of the eagles annoy the beach community. As time flies by, the vibrant rays of the sun warm up the sand and distribute its light over the glazed ocean. The remarkable palm trees compliments the sharp and refined moment on the beach. This satisfying feeling could trick anyone into thinking