Week 8 assignment
Strategies for Incorporating Feedback

Having two peers feedback on my expository essay is really a stress relieve and

very helpful. I receive a lot of different information from the instructor that will be very

helpful to my expository essay. I got feedback about not using third party person and

my introduction to be more specific on what my topic is mainly about. Having two peer

review could use all the help I can get. I can now use all the feedback given by my peers

and re-write the parts of my essay that had vagueness. I can also add things where I was

asked to give. The CWE gave feedback that was much like the instructors, but the

instructors feedback was more understandable than the CWE feedback. I will have an

easier time changing on what I think needs to be changed off the feedback from my

instructor and my peers. Reading my information and going through it gave me the

outcome of what others are reading. Summarizing my essay and adding more

information with it will help me a lot. It gave me ideas on what is really not important

and having one of my peers feels that certain paragraph I have is not really

important. For example; “if a parent successfully allots a specified time everyday to his

child's studies then the child is definitely going to score better? I will incorporate by

using my judgment and my peers advice and their help on what I need to do. This

feedback helps