Critique essay
Enc 1101

I am a single mother of two beautiful kids which I adore to death. Nothing in life can make me happier than to waking up every morning to Thais and Jahaira by my side. I am sure every mother goes through different experiences. I feel mine is special just because the fact that I am living it, but not everything is gold as they say. We all critizes many different thing I am one of them, I sometime sit in the park, as my kids play, watching people go by and thinking “hum I don’t like this about that one and that about this one but her shoes are nice” and I am sure other people do this to me, but I never really realize this till last semester when I for the first time was taking my oldest daughter to school. Of course being I am Hispanic and living a white area as Coral Gable’s is my kids will go to a white school and not completely blend in. But never did I expect it would be because of me; it was as I was entering to fill out paper work a lady, which looked very mean by the way, said “I am sorry ma’am but a legal guardian is the only person allowed to enroll their child”.

Never in my life have I felt more insulted, I was wondering who do you think I am but containing myself I said “I am her mother”, my child is 4 years old and is quite big for her ages but she certainly looks like my daughter. It is not as I am a 10 year old bringing in an 8 years old kid where you can’t tell the difference in age. The most curios part of this is when I step in to the office every single mother there about maybe twice my age. This made me think, they are in the park critiquing me thinking how I at such a young age can be mother to two girls. This made me feel very awkward and out of place. I though how many more experience like this will I go through. I am sure in the eyes of any other mother this will look silly but in my eyes it was just plain awful.

Than again a few days later I had to take Thais to the hospital, I as walked to the doctor and said what the reason was for me bringing her here. He