Technology has made us stupider
Articles
1. Where Steve jobs ranks among the greats.
2. Society is dead: we have retreated into the world.

Rick Newman
Andrew Sullivan
Analysis
….here’s my methodology instead of measuring the amount of wealth created, I am more interested in the impact that innovators have had on life in America….(3)
When others say “excuse me” there’s no response. “Hi”, ditto. It’s strange to be among so many people and hear so little. Except that each one is hearing so much….(5)
Rick and Andrew both were trying to explain about technology… one is explain that technology had played main role to change the society. And on other hand Andrew is trying to explain that techno is making people stupide…
But was he? Edison and ford devised innovations so profound they transformed whole societies and materially improved the lives of people…(10)
Americans are beginning to narrow their lives… (12)...Writing opposite to technology and their uses.
By the innovation in life. America is changing but, while changing society they had improved as well as made their lives narrow…
Job was truly a brilliant designer, marketer and technologist….all in one… (13) ….he took apple company at really high place. But, people were getting far from natural vision… as he made iPhone, iPad, iPod and many other music players...
But music is as atomized now as living is. And it’s secret. That bloke next to you on the bus could be listening to heavy metal or a Gregorian chant...(17)…you’ll never know other behind you...and even that proves that you really doesn’t want to know them…(17)
Job gave facility to society but made people more lazy and more to depend on the electronic gadgets…and to relay on technology... they don’t want to use their mind anymore…
Example… now people got smart phones that they can get any information from it. They can store data… and lot more so people can’t stay without it a movement….they rely on the new and advance technology…

Thesis: Job took his apple company at high place but, is Andrew agree with his technology? No because, he thinks technology had made people stupider...

Thesis: Even though technology had helped us but, technology is keeping us away from being touch with nature and we don’t know about the informational things. Topic sentence: As you know American people accept that technology has diverting to Anti-intellectualism.

Janaki Patel

Draft

As you know, American people accept that technology has diverting them to anti-intellectualism. Americans are in serious intellectual trouble, in danger, dark side of the world. As an example that you are following the innovation of Rick Newman’s idea’s but, also putting yourself in self-absorption. Even though, technology has helped us in many ways. Perhaps, Technology is also keeping us away from being touch with nature and we really don’t know about the informational things that we really need to know.
Rick Newman wants to measure the technology, how it affects the people. Here’s in the article, Rick Newman writes about his methodology: “instead of measuring the amount of wealth created, I am more interested in the impact that innovators have had on life in America….” (3.) He thinks that: “It’s not important that how many things innovators had created”. Rather than that Newman is more interested to know that how people were experiencing the technology. However, Andrew Sullivan is introducing the uses of technology that express how people were getting explicit in their own world. When others say “excuse me” there’s no response. “Hi”, ditto. It’s strange to be among so many people and hear so little. Except that each one is hearing so much…. (5) It means people were so integrated with technology: they even don’t want to come up and see who is behind them or who is calling them. World is so busy amongs themselves an dthey don’t have time for others or nature.

Steve job’s technology doesn’t have positive consequences towards the Sullivan