The shooting of Dan Mc Crew
(Version 2.0)
There once was a story about Dan Mc Crew it kind of went like this there he was the dangerous Dan Mc Crew sitting alone at the Malamute saloon having a drink. And there was the person he loved known as Lou. Then this miner fresh from the creeks came he looked like a man with a foot in the grave and scarcely the strength of a louse, he screamed “drinks one me” and the last person to drink was Dan Mc Crew. The miner turns and sees the girl known as Lou.
The miner never seen girl like her he just falls in love with her to impress her he starts playing the piano singing to her and trying to make her realise that it’s for her , but wait there was Dan Mc Crew who also loved a girl known has Lou.
After I while Lou realise and goes to miner and starts to sing with him then Dan Mc Crew saw he got really jealous and so angry because the girl he loved was the girl with the miner so he shuts the music and pulls his gun out and says “if whoever is alive gets Lou and you ever dies just dies” the miner agrees so the lights go of whoever is alive gets Lou.
There was three shots and a girl scream the lights come back on you see that not only one person is died but both of them are died they give up their lives away for I girl named as Lou, But you see no one asked Lou and Lou didn’t like neither of them she loved the boy named john.
Here you have the story of Dan Mc Crew.

Atmosphere
When I was reading the poem I kind of got lost but then later I got it when I read it like three times and for someone to explain it to me. The first lines a bunch of the boys were whooping it up in the Malamute saloon; the kid that handles the music-box was hitting a rag-time