College Admission Essay

There are many people that have influenced me in my life, but the person who has influenced my life more significantly than the others is my Dad. He has made me the strong person i am today. When i was young, he used to read to me for hours, quiz me for my weekly vocab tests and answer all my myriad questions. One thing i greatly admire about him is that even though he had his own problems, he never hesitated to help others. I greatly admire his strength. He Is always polite with other people that it made me follow his example. He also taught me to be patient. Family is the first priority to him and he pleasures every moment with us. I have lots of friends but i am much happier and relaxed when he is around. He taught me to consider everyone as a part of my family and taught me how to love people by sharing and giving. He taught me things that i need or was going to in my life. I am what i am because of him and whatever i will achieve in my life will be credited to him. I believe that my dad will always be with me even after his soul leaves his body. He will be there through the teachings that i believe are my duty to pass on to my children. My dad has inspired me to become an electrician. Hes been one for over thirteen years now.
I will bring many talents that i have gained coaching gymnastics to this college. I have been coaching gymnastics for two years now and from this experience i have been taught to be really patient and determined. Coaching gymnastics takes up a lot of time training. For this job I went through four months of training. I had to know how to spot my students while performing a trick without hurting them, knowing how to tell if my students were not setting right was also very important. If my students performed a trick improperly i knew what they did wrong and through this i fixed what was mistaken. By doing this everyday i have to see that same trick over and over professionally till this was engraved into my mind the right way to do it. Becoming a coach at Naydenovs Gymnastics has influenced me to do my work and be patient. In order to become successful in school you have to do the schoolwork that was provided for you by your teacher. Patience is something that takes time and effort, teachers are very patient with students that do not do their work. Coaching is very similar to school because the students have a task to do, they have to do their workout and training