Boston Tea Party

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Run-on

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GRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS

FINAL GRADE

150

/ 200

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1. no citations
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2. this doesn't look double spaced, it looks triple or quadruple spaced.
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3. paragraphs should be indented.
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4. w hat happened here?
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5. w hat is going on?
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P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. Depending upon what you wish to emphasize in the sentence, you may want to revise it using the active voice.
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Run- on This sentence may be a run-on sentence. Proofread it to see if it contains too many independent clauses or contains independent clauses that have been combined without conjunctions or punctuation. Look at the "Writer's
Handbook" for advice about correcting run-on sentences.
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Article Error You may need to remove this article.
Article Error You may need to remove this article.
Article Error You may need to use an article before this word. Consider using the article the.
P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. Depending upon what you wish to emphasize in the sentence, you may want to revise it using the active voice.
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Article Error You may need to remove this article.
P/V You have used the passive voice in this sentence. Depending upon what you wish to emphasize in the sentence, you may want to revise it using the active voice.
Sp. This word is misspelled. Use a dictionary or spellchecker when you proofread your work.
Frag. This sentence may be a fragment or may have incorrect punctuation. Proofread the sentence to be sure that it has correct punctuation and that it has an independent clause with a complete subject and predicate.
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Article Error You may need to remove this article.
A rticle
Run- on This sentence may be a run-on sentence. Proofread it to see if it contains too many independent clauses or contains independent clauses that have been combined without conjunctions or punctuation. Look at the "Writer's
Handbook" for advice about correcting run-on sentences.
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Article Error You may need to remove this article.
Frag. This sentence may be a fragment or may have incorrect punctuation. Proofread the sentence to be sure that it has correct punctuation and that it has an independent clause with a complete subject and predicate.
Frag. This sentence may be a fragment or may have incorrect punctuation.